Lovely model, good portrait, though to be critical, the ladies left arm is cropped out a bit. Also very square on - turning her so the one shoulder is nearer might work better. Great smile though!

Dunno - best looking computer i've ever seen prettier than my Mac even I can see what Mark is saying, it's a nice picture but not a 'great portrait' which is a shame because you're so close.

As has been said, if you get another chance, turn her at an angle, and talk to her to get different facial reactions. Let her strike poses of her own. Play and muck about with ideas, it will help you get a real natural look. Then get her to try the sulky effect! It works well when you have a shadow on the background.

Agree with what's been said before but still a great shot.

I only had time for two frames on the end of another job - Dell is available as a model if we can get a meet arranged for this area